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Cath-Lit Live Episode 24 — when the tables got turned on me!

Romance author Maddie Evans turned the tables on me for this one! She interviewed me about my new book Sweet Jesus, Is It June Yet? 10 Ways the Gospels Can Help You Combat Teacher Burnout and Rediscover Your Passion for Teaching.

The Amazon Book Blurb:

You work hard to motivate your students every day, but where can you find the inspiration you need when teaching gets tough or your passion for the classroom starts to wane?

Veteran teacher Amy J. Cattapan invites you to look to the greatest teacher of all time—Jesus. With humor and stories from the trenches, Cattapan draws valuable insight and tools from the Gospels and shares ten life-changing principles every teacher can learn from Jesus. In Sweet Jesus, Is It June Yet?, she’ll help you hang onto your sanity and fulfill your calling even when you’re feeling stressed, overwhelmed, and on the verge of burnout.

Classroom burnout is real. About 44 percent of new teachers in New York leave the profession by their fourth year and 40 percent of new teachers leave Chicago schools within five years. All over the country, managing online instruction has only added to the pressures teachers face.

In order to combat frustration and burnout, Cattapan will help you:

  • remember where your calling began
  • rediscover who this is all about
  • know when to lean on others for help;
  • learn how Jesus dealt with challenges
  • and understand that God’s grace really is enough.

Whether you’re a brand new teacher, a veteran educator, or a homeschooling parent, you’ll find wisdom—and more than a few laughs—in Cattapan’s reflections on the Great Teacher and in classroom stories straight from the front lines.

To catch all the new episodes, follow me on YouTube here.

“Crystallizing Experiences”: The Importance of Fiction and How “The Chosen” TV Series Ended up in My Dissertation

I’ve been meaning to write this for over a year now, but teaching during a pandemic (and writing a book about combating teacher burnout — which also mentions The Chosen!) rather derailed my plans. Now that season 2 of The Chosen has aired, and new criticisms of it trying to “rewrite Scripture” have surfaced, I figured it was time to share why I think this TV show could play an important role in evangelization and how on earth it ended up in my dissertation for my doctorate in education.

My Dissertation Topic

My dissertation (defended June 1, 2020) was entitled Engendering Empathy for Immigrants in Middle Grade Readers Through Culturally Relevant YA Literature. (YA stands for Young Adult. For the purpose of this study, I defined young adult literature as books aimed at teens and tweens.) That topic may appear to have nothing in common with a TV show about Jesus and His disciples, but what I discovered during my qualitative research is that the why behind my research questions can also explain why The Chosen has been having such a profound impact on people.

My Research Questions

As an English teacher, I was interested in discovering how reading a work of historical fiction as part of a literature course impacted students who were studying that same historical period in their history course. I conducted my research at a school where eighth graders studied the Great Immigration period of the United States (i.e. Ellis Island in the early 1900s) while reading a historical novel about immigrants in their reading class.

The students were broken into literature circles (think reading groups), each of which read one of the following novels:

  • Letters from Rifka (Karen Hesse) – the story of a Russian girl immigrating to the U.S. in the early 1900s, a very typical Ellis Island story which most closely related to their history course
  • Inside Out & Back Again (Thannha Lai) – the story of a Vietnamese refugee in the 1970s
  • Shooting Kabul (N.H. Senzai) – the story of a Muslim family fleeing the Taliban in Afghanistan just prior to 9/11

My goal was to answer a series of research questions to help me understand how these works of fiction impacted their understanding of the struggles immigrants face, especially their ability to think critically and empathize with the immigrant characters.

Slide 3 from my dissertation defense — YAL = Young Adult Literature

Data Collection

As a qualitative researcher, I triangulated my data by using three different types of data collection:

  • Interviews of students, including a pre-reading questionnaire and then a post-reading interview
  • Classroom observation, in which I listened as students discussed the novels in their literature circles
  • Document analysis, in which I analyzed the students’ written assignments

Two Key Concepts: Culturally Relevant Literature & Mirrors, Windows, & Sliding Glass Doors

Like other academic research, my study built on the work of past researchers. The following key concepts have become very familiar to anyone working in the fields of reading and education.

Culturally Relevant Literature

If you read ten different educational articles on “culturally relevant literature,” you might find ten slightly different definitions. For the purpose of my dissertation, I defined it as literature in which the readers see themselves and their communities reflected and valued (Fleming, Catapano, Thompson, & Carillo, 2016).

In other words, everyone deserves to see themselves reflected in the books they read. It was not, however, my goal to adopt a narrow definition of “culture” to mean simply “ethnicity.” Culture has many aspects. It can include age, historical time period, gender, language, food, geographic location, and religion. For the purpose of my study, it also included immigration status, i.e. whether someone was an immigrant, first-born generation, second generation, or beyond.

Mirrors, Windows, & Sliding Glass Doors

In 1990, Dr. Rudine Sims Bishop published an article entitled “Mirrors, Windows, and Sliding Glass Doors,” which has become the seminal piece in explaining why we need culturally relevant literature. According to Dr. Bishop, readers might have three different kinds of experiences when reading a book.

First, the book might be a mirror experience, in which the reader sees her own experience reflected. For example, as a Catholic, Italian American living in Chicagoland, I can read Carmela Martino’s middle grade novel Rosa, Sola and have a mirror experience because I can relate to the main character’s Italian culture, language, food, and religion. I would not, however, relate to the girl’s age (10) or her historical time period (1960s).

At the same time, a ten-year-old Irish Catholic girl might not relate to Rosa’s Italian culture, but she would see mirrored in the book her own religion and relate to Rosa as a fellow ten-year-old girl. Both the Irish Catholic girl and I could have mirror experiences with the same book, but in different ways.

Secondly, the book might offer a window experience by allowing the reader to peer into a culture that is different from her own. For example, I have no idea what it’s like to be an African-American teenage girl in the 21st century, but reading a young adult novel like The Hate U Give (Thomas, 2017) can act like a window that allows me to peer into that world for a while.

Thirdly, books can be sliding glass door experiences. In this case, the reader is able to “step through” and enter into the character’s unique experiences. In my dissertation, I offered the example of the middle grade novel Return to Sender by Julia Alvarez (2010). The chapters alternate perspectives and, with each one, we step into a different world. At times we step into the world of a Caucasian boy who can’t fathom why his family has hired undocumented workers to help on the family farm in Vermont. At other times, we step into the world of the Catholic Mexican daughter of one of those undocumented workers.

Participants in My Research

As stated above, I conducted interviews with students in addition to collecting data through classroom observations and document analysis.

My interview participants were 9 eighth graders. For clarity, I referred to immigrants as “first generation,” children with at least one immigrant parent as “second generation,” and grandchildren of one or more immigrant grandparents as “third generation.” My participants broke down as follows:

  • One first generation – an immigrant from Vietnam, who had arrived in the U.S. only a few years earlier
  • Seven second generation – children with at least one immigrant parent. Countries represented in this sampling included Bosnia, Assyria, Mexico, Romania, Albania, and Poland.
  • One third generation – the grandchild of an immigrant from India.

Data Results

Most of what my data found was confirmation of what previous researchers had found through quantitative measures; that is, that students developed greater empathy for real-life immigrants through reading fiction (Vezzali, Stathi, & Giovannini, 2012).

It was no great surprise that the Vietnamese immigrant related to the Vietnamese refugee in Inside Out & Back Again. In terms of culture, language, and food, she definitely had mirror experiences. However, she also admitted to having a bit of a window experience in that she was not a refugee who escaped rather quickly. Rather, her family applied for immigration and waited ten years to get permission to move to the U.S. Fortunately, her family was not the dire straits of the main character in the book, so she was able to peek into the dangerous world of what refugees from her country experienced during the Vietnamese War.

Meanwhile, some second-generation students related the character’s experiences to what they knew about their parents’ experiences. They could almost “see” their parents reflected in the main characters of the stories.

But here’s where things got interesting . . .

Students connected to the main characters in ways that expanded upon previous definitions of cultural relevance. In their interviews, students revealed to me that they related to them in ways beyond just culture, language, and age. Even if they did not share the same culture, language, time period, or generational status as the main character, they still found moments of mirror experiences. They related to how the immigrant characters were often bullied before, during, and/or after immigrating. Not because they were immigrant themselves, but just because bullying is such a prevalent problem at their age.

They also related to similar family situations. Often the main characters had difficult situations with siblings and/or parents, and the students related to that as well. Many of the books involved a character losing or being separated from a family member, and they told me about the times when they grieved the loss of a close relative.

In other words, students were able to relate to experiences even when they did not share a common language, culture, religion, or even time period with the main character.

Things didn’t get really interesting, though, until I looked specifically at those second-generation students. And that’s when I coined a new term . . . .

Crystallizing Experiences

In looking over my research notes, I noticed a phenomenon that I had not seen or read about while completing my literature review. Since seven of the nine participants were the children of immigrants, they had an experience with the novels that combined facets of both mirror and window experiences. In other words, they saw their parents’ experiences reflected in the characters in the novels—almost a secondhand mirror experience. It was as if, in the mirror, they saw their parents standing behind them. At the same time, the novels provided a window experience through which they could peer deeper into the experience of an immigrant and perhaps even understand their own parents’ experiences better.

For example, Avani (pseudonym), the daughter of two Bosnian immigrants, had heard her parents’ immigration stories but confessed that reading Letters from Rifka brought her greater understanding of what her parents had experienced:

When my mom told me the story of her coming here, she only got into detail a bit. She just said she was actually in college in England and then she had to come back for my uncle and my grandma, and she went to America, and she told me a little bit [about] how she came here with like nothing, so I was like, ‘Oh, that must have been really hard,’ but when I read the story, I really kind of pictured what my mom had to go through. I was like, ‘Wow, that’s terrible,’ you know? I’m probably going to ask my mom a little more about it because it’s really interesting.

(Avani, Interview, February 13, 2020)

Avani shared with me how she felt driven to learn more about immigration in general and her parents’ experiences specifically after reading the fictional account of an immigrant’s struggles. I’ll come back to this later when I discuss The Chosen TV series.

Second generation students experienced both “reflection” (left) and “refraction” (right) while reading these novels.

At first, this dual mirror-window experience reminded me of a prism, specifically a triangular, or optical, prism. With a triangular prism, light can hit the glass surfaces in two possible ways. If the light hits it straight on, all of the light is reflected straight back, and the prism acts as a mirror. However, if the light hits the surface at an angle, the light is refracted (instead of reflected) and a rainbow appears. The beam of white light that entered the prism leaves it at varying wavelengths, and the white light expands out into a full rainbow of colors.

 The more I contemplated this image, the more it suited the experiences of all the participants. All of them had at least some moments of mirroring. At the same time, they all came to a greater understanding of what it meant to be an immigrant or a refugee. Through the novels, they saw vibrant pictures of what it means to be an immigrant, just like someone sees all the colors of the rainbow when white light is refracted. In that sense, the book took what they already knew about immigration and refracted it for them in a way that brought them an expanded understanding. They could now see, smell, hear, and almost feel what it was like to be an immigrant.

From Prisms to Crystals

Digging deeper into my data, I discovered that these books were able to create this deeper understanding because the authors of these YA novels used a whole toolbox of literary devices (e.g. sensory details, figurative language, first-person narrator or third-person narrators with deep point of view) to give readers the sights, sounds, and emotions of the immigrant experience. In other words, these novels took immigration stories that had previously been “black and white” in the students’ history textbook, or even in their parents’ retellings, and turned them into glorious technicolor movies in their minds.

I returned to my research and discovered something I had not known about crystals. A crystal is “any solid material in which the component atoms are arranged in a definite pattern and whose surface regularity reflects its internal symmetry” (Manan, 2020). In other words, the determining factor in classifying something as a crystal is tied to its internal structure. Just as the atoms in a crystal must be arranged in a particular way in order to make it a crystal, so must the words in a novel be arranged in a certain way in order to evoke empathy in the reader.

Crystals then become prismatic when their surfaces create opportunities for both reflection and refraction. In other words, these books functioned as prismatic crystals. They were able to create both mirror and window experiences that took the students’ understanding to a deeper, fuller level because of the way the words inside them had been chosen and arranged.

These books made clear for the students something they had had a basic understanding of prior to reading the novels. The fiction they read helped to crystallize their understanding. Thus, the crystallizing metaphor works on two levels: 1) to explain how the way authors write their books impacts the ability of the reader to empathize with the character, and 2) to demonstrate how books can reflect and refract the reader’s world in ways that help them clarify their thoughts and understandings.

How does this relate to The Chosen TV series?

As stated at the beginning, I defended my dissertation in June of 2020, which means I wrote the final chapters at the very start of the pandemic. At the time of the initial stay-at-home orders, people were looking for shows to binge on TV and, with livestreamed episodes of The Chosen being shared on YouTube, many more people were suddenly checking it out. (For the record, I binged it in January of 2020. I had just received my IRB approval and had about a week of downtime before I began my data collection in the classroom, which gave me about a week to “binge Jesus,” as they say.)

As more and more people praised this show for helping them to understand Jesus better, I contemplated why this was happening, and I realized that it related to my research findings. The evangelists who wrote the four Gospels were interested in recording history. They were not authors trained in the craft of writing, nor did they need to flesh out in vivid sensory details what life was like in the Middle East 2,000 years ago. Their readers already knew! In other words, they were more like the historians who just tell you what happened without a lot of literary embellishment. Thus, the Gospels can read a bit like a dry history textbook at times.

However, when a talented, modern-day filmmaker like Dallas Jenkins comes along and presents the stories in such a way that the contemporary viewer can now smell the stinky fish on Simon Peter when he returns home from a day of fishing and see the dirt on Jesus’s clothes, the story suddenly becomes more relatable because we can picture it better.

In previous Christian films, Jesus is often depicted as more of an abstraction; his divine nature is brought to the forefront while his human nature is minimized. However, The Chosen, with its scenes of Jesus laughing, brushing his teeth, and dancing at a wedding, reminds viewers that Jesus is both divine and human. It’s as if, for the first time, people are seeing Jesus as a flesh-and-bone creature! He’s become tangible for them.

This meme shared on The Chosen Facebook page sums it all up!

That is why people are connecting with this show so much—because Jesus and his disciples have suddenly become culturally relevant again, precisely because they are depicted as having normal human experiences. (Remember how I said that the students in my study related to experiences more than any other aspect?) In The Chosen, viewers can now relate to the experiences of Biblical characters. Married couples can relate to both the joys and struggles of Simon and Eden’s marriage. Children can relate to characters like Abigail and Joshua. Anyone who has ever fallen from grace can relate to Mary Magdalene. Any of us who have ever tried to convince a sibling of something can relate to Andrew trying to convince Simon that the Messiah has come!   

The same thing occurred with the YAL in my study. The immigrants were no longer abstractions. They were “real” human beings, with normal human experiences, like caring for siblings, grieving the loss of loved ones, and wanting to avoid bullies.

In other words, just as it required the skill of the talented authors who wrote the YA novels that brought immigration stories to life for the students, so has The Chosen succeeded because of the skill of the writers, director, actors, cinematographers, costumers, musicians, etc.

What Can We Learn From This?

I hope my dissertation helps people understand the value of reading fiction, and I hope The Chosen helps people realize that it really is okay to use our God-given imaginations to create works of Biblical fiction, which is sort of a subset of historical fiction.

The novels in my study were historical fiction because they included factual historical events, but they also included fictitious characters. Similarly, The Chosen includes historical facts, events, and people from the Bible while simultaneously adding some imagined (but plausible!) characters, such as Simon’s wife, as well as new (but again very plausible) scenes, such as the Apostles arguing around a campfire.

And what’s the best part of all this? Let’s return to Avani’s quote above. After reading the fictionalized account of an immigrant, she wanted to learn more about immigration issues in general and about her mom’s experience in particular. In other words, the fiction inspired her to learn more facts!

Similarly, many are reporting that watching The Chosen is inspiring them to head to their Bibles to pick out what is actually fact from what is fiction. To be clear, the writers are not altering stories from the Bible, but rather extrapolating upon them and filling in the gaps for parts the evangelists didn’t write down. For example, we know from the story of Jesus healing Simon’s mother-in-law that Simon must have had a wife. However, since the Bible includes no details about Simon’s wife at all, the writers have to use their imaginations to create a plausible wife character for a first century Jewish fisherman.

Personally, I’ve found myself checking details in the Bible after watching the show. For example, the season 1 finale covers the story of the Samaritan woman at the well, a story I like to think I know quite well. (My friend Stephanie Landsem wrote a beautiful work of Biblical fiction called The Well, which is based on that same story.) However, when the woman at the well mentions that it was their ancestor Jacob who built the well, I had thought the writers had inserted that detail. Nope. It was only when I was reading my Bible later that I discovered that detail actually is in the Bible! The writers hadn’t made that one up at all.

So while some may worry that Dallas Jenkins’s show is trying to “replace” or “rewrite” the Bible, I think their worry is unfounded. Reading historical novels made several of the students I interviewed want to ask their parents more about their immigration experiences, and others noted that they were vaguely aware of immigration stories in the news, but now they wanted to pay attention better because their eyes were being opened to the true struggles of immigrants. In the same way, The Chosen is encouraging people to pick up their Bibles because they want to know where factual information drops off and plausible ideas enter into each story line.

Final Thoughts

If you follow me on social media, you know I’ve talked about The Chosen quite a bit in the last year and a half. It’s not just in my dissertation; it’s also in my upcoming book for teachers: Sweet Jesus, Is It June Yet? Some people have asked if I’m on the marketing payroll over at The Chosen, which makes me laugh. No, I am not. I mean, I wouldn’t turn down a role as an extra if Dallas offered me one–but I have enough jobs, I don’t need a new one. 😉

Really, whether I’m talking about TV shows or books or interviewing authors, I pray that my goal is always the same: to inspire people to live as Jesus would and to make sure all I do is for the greater glory of God.

Ad majorem Dei gloriam!

Brief Bibliography

  • Alvarez, J. (2010). Return to sender. Yearling.
  • Bishop, R. S. (1990). Mirrors, windows, and sliding glass doors. Perspectives, 6 (3), ix–xi.
  • Fleming, J., Catapano, S., Thompson, C.M., & Carrillo, S.R. (2016). More mirrors in the classroom: Using urban children’s literature to increase literacy. Rowman & Littlefield.
  • Hesse, K. (1992). Letters from Rifka. H. Holt.
  • Lai, T. (2017). Inside out & back again. Harper, an imprint of HarperCollins.
  • Martino, C. (2018). Rosa, Sola. Arquilla Press.
  • Senzai, N. H. (2010). Shooting Kabul. Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers.
  • Thomas, A. (2017). The Hate U Give. Balzar + Bray.
  • Vezzali, L., Stathi, S., & Giovannini, D. (2012). Indirect contact through book reading: Improving adolescents’ attitudes and behavioral intentions toward immigrants. Psychology in the Schools, 49(2), 148–162. https://doi-org.flagship.luc.edu/10.1002/pits.20621

My next book!

Hello, old friends! It’s been over a year since my last blog post. Please forgive my neglect, but I’ve been hard at work on my doctoral program while trying to keep up with the demands of my teaching job–and working on a new book project!

In case you haven’t heard on social media yet (I talk about everything on Instagram, you know), I recently signed a book contract with Ave Maria Press! I started work on the idea for this book nearly two years ago during spring break 2018. I had the idea then for a book about what teachers could learn by studying how Jesus taught. I worked on the original outline for that book while on a silent retreat during spring break. When I returned home, teaching and my doctoral program got all my attention again, and the book idea was set aside until the summer.

Over the next year and half, I hacked away at revising my original idea in between semesters and summer school sessions, and with help from editor Jaymie Stuart Wolfe from Ave Maria Press. And now I can announce that I have signed an official book contract with them, and the book should be out during the first half of 2021.

While I have a good headstart on writing the book due to the detailed outline, I won’t really be able to finish the manuscript until this summer since I still have that pesky dissertation to finish first.

Signing the contract with my dad as my witness.
Ignore all his Christmas decoration boxes in the background.
We’re just keeping it real, y’all!

In the meantime, I can tell you that the book will focus on combating teacher burnout through Scripture reflections (something I could use right now in the midst of the dreary month of February), and I’ll be dedicating my book to my dad since he has always supported my teaching career.

Stay tuned for more news! (And keep the prayers coming for my dissertation. This has been the longest haul of my life, and I’m actually finishing a lot faster than many other full-time teachers do.)

Top 8 Tips for Writing for Teens & Tweens

Last Sunday, I had to pleasure of joining a panel of authors from the Mystery Writers of America in a free workshop on writing for young readers. For those of you who weren’t able to make it, I thought I’d share a bit about what I’ve learned over the years with regard for writing for young readers, particularly middle grade and young adult.

Learn these top 8 tips for writing for young readersTIP #1: Read many books for the age group you want to write for.

If you want to write for teens, read a lot of young adult books. If you want to write for tweens, read a lot of upper middle grade books. There’s definitely a difference between the two, and you won’t know it unless you read a lot of both. Young adult novels have a much more introspective tone and often deal with much more complex questions about life, family, and friends–and most importantly, one’s place in the world. Upper middle grade novels tend to be more about friendships and fitting it, but they can still touch on tough topics. However, if they deal with tougher topics, they tend to do so in more of an off-the-page, slightly removed way, whereas YA books aren’t afraid to bring the difficult issue to the forefront. A YA book can spend longer periods being reflective as the teen protagonist tries to sort out her beliefs. A middle grade book will spend less time being reflective and more time keeping the plot rolling.

Kid readers are smart readers.

Kid readers are smart readers.

TIP #2: Don’t dumb down your stories or characters.

Young readers still demand that their stories are full of realistic and likeable characters that are fully rounded. Flat, one-dimensional characters are dull. Young readers know when they are being talked down to or preached to. Even if you find your sentence structure and vocabulary slightly less robust in a middle grade novel, it doesn’t mean that your story should be simple or your vocabulary stale. There’s a difference between limiting challenging vocabulary (or complex sentence structure) and completely eliminating them.

Remember that your books will be competing with this.

Remember that your books will be competing with this.

TIP #3: Keep the action moving.

This is especially true for middle grade books, but it can hold true for young adult novels, especially ones aimed at younger teens. In this fast-paced, technology-driven world, your writing needs to compete with 60-second Instagram videos and 10-second Snapchat clips. Study the pacing of other popular YA novels and see if it matches yours. Popular movies can also give you a hint at what good plot pacing looks like. See Save the Cat by Blake Snyder for tips on plotting out your story arc so that the reader stays engaged.

You don't have to do this writing thing alone.

You don’t have to do this writing thing alone.

TIP #4: Join a professional writing organization.

There’s so much to learn about the craft of writing as well as the business of marketing books that you could spend years researching this all online. Save yourself some time and join a writing organization like the Society of Children’s Book Writers & Illustrators or the Mystery Writers of America so that you can learn from others’ experiences. Attend conferences and workshops. Not only are these informative and fun, but you’ll make great connections with other writers and you’ll find yourself recharged for writing again.

Everyone needs a good laugh now and then.

Everyone needs a good laugh now and then.

TIP #5: Add humor to your story.

Young readers love humor. Even if you’re writing a serious story, see if you can’t inject a little humor now and then (even if it’s sarcastic) in order to vary the tone and tempo of your story. Being in middle school and high school is no walk in the park. Teens and tweens enjoy the chance to laugh even in the midst of their struggles. Create a character that they can laugh with, and they’ll be eating out of your hands.

Keep your writing timeless, not uber trendy.

Keep your writing timeless, not uber trendy.

TIP #6: Don’t overdo the slang.

I’ve seen a couple unpublished authors do this. They think they have to use “teen speak” in their books in order for their characters to seem realistic. The problem is two-fold: first, unless you really know how teens speak, you’ll probably misuse any slang you think they use. Second, whatever terms are popular today are likely to be unpopular by the time your book is published. While you don’t want your teen characters to sound too adult, you also don’t want them so firmly rooted in a generations’s slang that the book quickly becomes dated.

Don't bore your reader until she's tempted to throw her books up into the air.

Don’t bore your reader until she’s tempted to throw her books up into the air.

TIP #7: Avoid overly lengthy descriptions.

This one is especially true for the middle graders. Older teens can better wade through description if it’s told in an interesting enough voice, but my middle schoolers often lament books where the narrator just “describes stuff too much.” They want the action to keep moving. Give them enough description that they can picture the character and the setting, but don’t create long paragraphs of description. Work the description into the action. Instead of telling them every single detail about your character’s appearance at once, sprinkle the description throughout the story. Have her catch her reflection in a shop window and remark how typically flat her blonde hair looks today. Or have her slip on her shoes as she laments the fact that her feet are so freakishly small she has to shop in the kids’ department.

Are you writing for a teen or a tween?

Are you writing for a teen or a tween?

TIP #8: Know your age group.

As stated before, some people really struggle with the difference between YA and middle grade. If you don’t have children in those age groups, read up on books written for them. Learn what word lengths are common for each age group and each genre. A YA romance will probably not be as long as a YA fantasy or a YA sci-fi. Middle grade humor books will be probably shorter then middle grade historicals. Again, the best way to learn all this is by reading widely in the age group and genre you want to write for.

Most of all, have fun! Teen and tween readers are the best fans! They are devoted to writers they like, and they eagerly anticipate the next book.

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How I Plan to Spend My Longest/Shortest Summer Ever

I’m embarking on the longest summer I’ve ever known–and will probably ever know. Thanks to construction plans, we started school early this past year, which means we got out early. Furthermore, the construction will last long enough that we won’t be able to start school again until after Labor Day. I’ve never had a summer that has stretched from before Memorial Day to after Labor Day. Over 14 weeks of summer. I should be thrilled. I should be relieved. I should feel excited and exhilarated.

I’m terrified.

As the last few weeks of the school year were winding down, I found myself becoming increasingly anxious about the summer. When you find out you’re going to have a very extended time off of work, you start to think about all the things you can get done, and soon your to-do list is so long, you’re sure you’ll fail miserably. There’s no way you can possibly finish everything you plan to do.

So what does a teacher plan to do when she has “time off”?

What does a teacher do on her longest summer ever? Apparently, panic!

Apparently, a lot of work! That’s what I plan to do!

Here’s what’s on the agenda for this summer . . .

Doctorate classes

I’m taking two. The first one started this past Monday. It’s a six-week, online course on educational research. The good news is that I don’t have to drive anywhere. The bad news is that it’s a semester-long class jammed into six weeks. There’s an assignment due pretty much every day.

The second class will be a two-week course on educational leadership in multicultural schools. This course will be in Rome. Yay!

Italian classes

When in Rome, do as the Romans do! And that means taking a class where we speak only Italian!Those of you who have been around for a while know that I’ve spent at least two weeks during each of the last two summers studying Italian in Italy. This year I’ll have only one week of study tacked on to the end of the doctorate class in Rome. Since I have just one week to study Italian, I’m taking their “Super Inatensive” class, which means having lessons in the morning and afternoon.

Purging

Inspired by retiring coworkers who had to clean out their classrooms as well as friends who are following a particular purging program, I’ve decided to do some major cleaning this summer. I have a very small home, which is both a good and a bad thing. It’s good because there isn’t a lot to clean. It’s bad because I have no room for all my stuff. Somehow I need to organize all my teaching stuff, my writing stuff, my church stuff, my doctorate program stuff, and just in general, clean house. My plan is to take one small section per day and really clean it out–just one drawer, or one shelf, or one cabinet. Hopefully, spending just a few minutes a day will keep me from burning out.

Writing a new novel

Obviously, this is a huge goal, and to make it worse, I haven’t decided yet what that novel is going to be. I have a couple vague ideas, so I’m going to spend time this week discerning between the two.

Writing a short story

I have a chance to enter a middle grade mystery story in an anthology that’s being edited by a big name in kids’ literature. There’s no guarantee my story will get picked, but if I don’t at least write one and try to get in, I’ll never know if I could have written something good enough!

Reading List: Doctorate Program

I need to read five books for my doctorate classes before July 1:

  1. Educational Research
  2. The Culturally Proficient School: An Implementation Guide for School Leaders
  3. Implementing RTI With English Language Learners
  4. English Language Learners and the New Standards: Developing Language, Content Knowledge, and Analytical Practices in the Classroom
  5. A Thousand Splendid Suns

Want to Read List:

  1. the rest of The Lunar Chronicles series by Marissa Meyer
  2. Love’s Perfect Surrender by Chiara Talluto
  3. Rome’s Original Tituli: A Pilgrim’s Guide to the Eternal City’s Ancient House Churches
  4. Stay with Me by Carolyn Astfalk
  5. Ten Commandments for Kissing Gloria Jean by Britt Leigh
  6. I Thirst by Gina Marinello-Sweeney

Promote Seven Riddles to Nowhere

7 Riddles 3dOh goodness gracious! I have a new book coming out at the end of the summer!

That means I’ve got to get on promotion. Things to do include the following:

  • make a book trailer
  • write guest blog posts
  • put together a whole blog tour schedule
  • assemble a launch team
  • throw a Facebook party
  • arrange book signings at various locations

Speaking Engagements

At this moment, I appear to have five for the summer: three are author visits at area schools, one is for the Catholic Writers’ Conference, and one is for the Archdiocese of Los Angeles’s annual tech conference. (Did I mention I’m going to California this summer?

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As you can see, that’s a daunting list. My biggest fear is that I’ll succumb to the sin of sloth! You see, I love to sleep! There’s nothing better on a day off of work than getting to sleep in. The problem is that the more I sleep in, the later I stay up the next night. The later I stay up, the more I sleep in the next morning. The cycle repeats until suddenly I find myself wide awake at 2:00 A.M., and the next day I feel so sluggish that nothing gets done.

Need help getting that writing project finished? Multi-published author Allie Pleiter takes you through the steps of breaking that huge project into manageable chunks!

I can’t let that happen this summer. In order to tackle my to do list, I’m going to need to muster all the self-discipline I can. That’s why last night, I attended a talk by my author-friend Allie Pleiter. She’s written a whole book on how to get your writing done in chunks. (You can check out Allie’s book The Chunky Method on Amazon here.)

Her talk last night was very helpful. I’m feeling a little less panicked because I have some tools for facing my daunting to do list.

Now if I can just keep myself from hitting the snooze button in the morning, I’ll have a fantastic summer!

Behind-the-scenes of one of my settings!

Last weekend, I went out and did some photo shoots of some of the Chicagoland locations used in my upcoming middle grade mystery Seven Riddles to Nowhere.

In this video, I take you behind the scenes of the Chicago suburban location that started it all!

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Selling Your Books on Pinterest

In January, I had the pleasure of speaking with the Chicago chapter of ACFW (American Christian Fiction Writers) about how to use Pinterest as a marketing tool for authors.

Learn how to use Pinterest as a marketing tool for your books! Pinterest isn't just for getting ideas for your characters and your settings. It's a way to find readers. Learn how!If you missed it, you still have a chance to hear my talk–and you don’t even have to leave your home! I’ll be presenting on how to use Pinterest to sell your books at the Catholic Writers Online Conference March 4-6! You can sign up here!

This faith-focused authors conference offers presentations covering all aspects of writing from finding your calling as a writer to publishing and marketing your books. There will also be online pitch sessions with noted Catholic publishers and secular publishers.

On my talk on Pinterest, we’ll discuss how to optimize your personal profile, why you should convert to a business account, how to make your website Pinterest-friendly, how to use a free service like Picmonkey to create super shareable pins, how to grow your following, and why you should be joining and using group Pinterest boards.

The conference will be held using webinar software, making the experience more personal and immediate.

This year’s sessions include an emphasis on the faith aspects of writing no matter what the genre. Speakers like Gary Zimak, author of Faith, Hope and Clarity; Joe Wetterling, President of the Catholic Writer’s Guild, horror author Jonathan Ryan and others will speak on writing as a calling, a literary revolution, and an evangelization. In addition, there are practical workshops including legal issues, techniques for characterization and plotting, how to journal, and time management.

Join the Catholic Writers' Conference Online this March 4-6! Learn from industry professionals on a wide variety of topics. Registration is only $25 for Catholic Writers Guild members and $40 for nonmembers.Pitch sessions give authors with finished books a chance to personally interest a publisher. Pitch sessions include well known Catholic publishers like Servant Books, smaller presses like Liberty Island, and ebook publishers like eTreasures.

This year’s conference is $40; $25 for members of the Catholic Writers’ Guild. To register or for more information, go to http://www.catholicwritersconference.com.

Why Christian Authors are Gaga over Star Wars

As the days drew closer and closer to the release of Star Wars: The Force Awakens, the hype and excitement online grew palpable. As more and more people talked about it on Facebook, I noticed that a great deal of the excitement was coming from my fellow Christian authors. Sure, you’d expect the sci-fi geeks among us to get all excited, but why would Christian authors be talking about it so much? In fact, I think I saw more posts about it from my Christian author friends than my sci-fi geek friends.

So why? What about Star Wars has so many Christian authors fangirling over it?

Why is it about the Star Wars saga that has all the Christian authors gaga over it?

I’ll start with some of the generic reasons and then move on to the more explicitly Christian reasons.

1. Authors love a good hero story. At its heart, Star Wars is more than a sci-fi adventure flick. It’s a hero story. George Lucas has admitted he used Joseph Campbell’s theory of the monomyth (the idea that all hero stories throughout all time and all cultures are essentially the same) in order to craft his story. If you need more information on this, check out my three-part blog series on the monomyth, complete with comparisons to Star Wars and Harry Potter and The Wizard of Oz.

2. Authors love good characters. This is one of the reasons that the original trilogy is superior to the prequel trilogy. The characters in the original movies complemented each other so well. We had all the great story archetypes:

  • a beautiful, brave, and feisty princess who may appear to be a damsel in distress at first but can really fend for herself, thank you very much
  • a young man ready to make the transition from lost soul into hero, all while desperately missing the family he lost
  • the rogue good guy who doesn’t really want to be a good guy, but he just can’t seem to help himself–and it doesn’t hurt that he’s terribly good looking and the princess is falling for him
  • humorous sidekicks in the forms of robots and a Wookie
  • an evil villain who looks scary, sounds scary, and acts scary–and to make it even better, has an interesting backstory!!!
  • an elderly mentor to help guide our young hero and who demonstrates what it means to sacrifice yourself for a cause worth fighting for

My gingerbread and fondant versions of Princess Leia and R2-D2 for a school gingerbread house decorating contest.

My gingerbread and fondant versions of Princess Leia and R2-D2 for a school gingerbread house decorating contest.

3. Authors love imaginative world building. This is probably especially true for all the speculative fiction authors among us, whether we right dystopian, fantasy, steampunk, or supernatural. We enjoy the fact that Lucas built a whole world out there, filled with knights, lightsabers, alien creatures, all sorts of droids, various planets with different climates, and a plethora of space ships. And we feel as if we could step right into that world and be a part of it.

4. Authors, Christian authors in particular, love a story about good versus evil. Again, at its heart, Star Wars is a hero story, but even deeper than that, it’s a story of good versus evil, sin versus redemption. Christian authors are always writing stories about people dealing with faith issues and/or finding God, and at its essence that is what Star Wars is about, too. The characters are struggling to find the good in the galaxy. The Jedi knights in particular are fighting for the good side of the Force to win out over the dark side.

There are lots of ways “The Force” can be interpreted within a Christian worldview. Lucas himself admitted that he put the Force into his movie because he wanted people to at least question whether or not there is a God (which he does believe in, but doesn’t have a particular religion he’s promoting in his movies). According to the 2000 documentary The Mythology of Star Wars, Lucas said this when asked if the Force represented God:  “I put The Force into the movies in order to try to awaken a certain kind of spirituality in young people. More a belief in God than a belief in any particular religious system.”

Yet for those of us who are Christian, it’s easy to see how the Force may represent God, or at least one part of the Holy Trinity, that is the Holy Spirit. In Star Wars: A New Hope, Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi described the Force to young Luke Skywalker by saying, “It surrounds us and penetrates us. It binds the galaxy together.” In a way isn’t that what we believe about the Holy Spirit? In John 14:16-17, Jesus says, “And I will ask the Father, and he will give you another Helper, to be with you forever, even the Spirit of truth, whom the world cannot receive, because it neither sees him nor knows him. You know him, for he dwells with you and will be in you.” You can’t see the Force, but those who “know” it are considered “strong” in the Force. It lives inside them, just like the Spirit lives in Jesus’s followers.

When you have the Force, you can do amazing things that you can’t do on your own. Likewise, when we allow the Holy Spirit to work through us, we can do amazing things. In the Acts of the Apostles 2:1-13, the Apostles receive the Holy Spirit at Pentecost and then they are able to go out and make bold proclamations in every language even though they hadn’t spoken these languages before! We saw similar “miracles” happen in the original Star Wars trilogy when Luke starts training in the ways of the Force, and in the new Star Wars movie, Rey finds out she’s an even better pilot than she expected and that she can wield a lightsaber and fight off a trained member of the dark side–okay, he’s been injured at this point, but still . . . these are probably not things she could have done before figuring out she may just be strong in the Force.

Jedi knights have training periods where they go away to prepare for battle. Luke has to travel to the distant Degobah system in order to train with the Jedi Master Yoda who tells him that “a Jedi’s strength flows from the Force.” Before Jesus begins his ministry, he heads out to the desert. We are told in Luke 4:1-2 that “Jesus, full of the Holy Spirit, then returned from the Jordan and was conducted by the Spirit into the desert for forty days, where he was tempted by the devil.” Fans of Star Wars will remember that when Luke was training with Yoda he was “tempted” by the dark side when he faced a vision of Darth Vader in a cave. In both cases here, we have someone preparing for the ordeals they will face ahead, both are filled with the Spirit/Force, and both are tempted by evil.

Speaking of evil, just as there are fallen angels who have taken God’s gifts and tossed them aside in order to wreck havoc in this world, so are there “fallen” members of the Jedi order. Ones who left the good side in order to join the “dark side.” We see this imagery of light versus dark often in the Star Wars series. In the new Star Wars movie (major SPOILER here, people), Leia tells Han she believes there is still “light” in their son who has turned to the dark side. In Return of the Jedi, Luke tells Leia that he has to go save their father because there is still good/light in him.

Dark and light imagery is prevalent in the Bible many, many times. In 1 John 1:5, the evangelist tells us that “God is light, and in him there is no darkness at all.” And in John 8:12, we hear “Again Jesus spoke to them, saying, ‘I am the light of the world. Whoever follows me will not walk in darkness, but will have the light of life.'”

So important is this theme of the light versus the dark in both scripture and Star Wars that one of my Christian author friends, Pepper Basham, dressed up her kids as Star Wars characters for her Christmas card and then included the quote “The Light shines in the darkness and the darkness cannot overcome it.–John 1:5.” You can see it on her author Facebook page here.

Then, of course, we have the common themes of self-sacrifice and redemption. Jesus sacrificed Himself on the cross. In Star Wars, we see many characters sacrificing themselves. Obi-Wan sacrifices himself at the end of the A New Hope. Vader sacrifices himself in order to destroy the Emperor at the end of Return of the Jedi, and (SPOILER AGAIN!), Han’s actions at the end of The Force Awakens are quite sacrificial as well. He knew he was putting his life at risk to go save his son, but he did it anyway.

As for redemption, we have the ultimate redemption story in Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader. In Episode 1, we are told that Anakin comes from a Virgin birth. He is believed to be the one who will restore order to the galaxy and balance to the Force which has fallen to the dark side. However, he falls to the dark side himself in Episode 3, but in a move that is very Christian in nature, he is redeemed (by his son, of course!) at the end of Return of the Jedi when he turns back to the good side and throws the Emperor down that chute. (Yeah, I know, I’m really technical with my space station terms. 🙂 ) And of course, we’re all hoping Han and Leia’s son will find redemption by the end of this new trilogy.

And if all that isn’t enough to convince you of the Christian themes within Star Wars, check out this Buzz Feed article on the 5 Reasons Ignatius of Loyola was the First Jedi Master. Apparently, Lucas may have purposely based his Jedi Knights on the Jesuit Order of priests. As you’ll read in the article, they do have a lot in common: service and humility, self-awareness and self-mastery, spiritual direction, detachment, and finding God in all things.

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Does this mean all Christians, or even just all Christian authors, will love Star Wars? No. Some may like their Christian messages to be more explicit and less allegorical. Some may simply not like sci-fi. And that’s okay. But as the Jesuits would say, “God meets us where we are.” And for some of us Christian authors, that’s in the movie theater.

How to create Pinterest pins that bring traffic to your author website

Pinterest Tips for Authors--Bring traffic to your website!

Over the last few weeks, I’ve been doing a lot of research on how to use Pinterest as an author, and a number of my author friends have asked me to share what I learned. Because Pinterest is a visual medium, it’s a lot easier to show you what to do rather than tell you, so I created a video.

Here are a few more general Pinterest tips that aren’t mentioned in the video:

  1. Make sure you have a profile picture on your Pinterest page. People are less likely to follow you if they can’t see who you are. Besides, you’re building an author brand. You are your brand.
  2. Consider adding a title like “author” or “mystery writer” after your name on your profile. For example, I’m “A.J. Cattapan, author.” That way I’m more likely to be found when people search for authors, and people will know exactly what they’re getting when they follow me.
  3. Make sure the description under your name has key terms that will help people identify you who are. As a writer, you’ll probably want to list what you write as well as what writing groups you belong to.

Again, the video is a step-by-step tutorial for creating the best pins. It does not cover the three things listed above. Instead, you’ll learn . . .

  1. what makes some Pinterest pins stand out from others.
  2. how to create attention-grabbing photos without buying an expensive photoshop program.
  3. how to pin those photos to Pinterest so that they drive attention back to your website–even if those photos aren’t actually on your website at all!

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Spin Cycle: Teaching and Writing

With all the book launch craziness going on lately, I haven’t had much time for blog posts, but I promised my launch team friend Ginny Marie that I’d get back on this blogging business! This week’s Spin Cycle topic of teaching seemed like a good time to do so.

I certainly know something about teaching. I’ve been doing it for . . . well, never mind how long I’ve been teaching. I was just excited today when my sixth graders found out I’ve been at our school for eight years, and one of them said, “Really? I didn’t think you were that old!” I’d give the kid an A for that comment, but he’s already getting one! 😉

I’ve debated quite a bit about what exactly to say. On a recent guest blog post, I’ve already talked about how my careers as a writer and as a teacher have overlapped, so I thought I’d take this topic one step further and talk about what exactly has been happening lately.

Angelhood 2 1400x2100The regulars around here know that last month my young adult novel Angelhood was released by Vinspire Publishing. It’s been an exciting time, but I haven’t been sharing it with my students. Some have wondered why not. Aren’t they my target audience? Couldn’t it create some teachable moments?

I have, in the past, shared some of my writing successes with my students. For example, several years ago, I had a Highlights magazine article published about a former student and the experiment he had on one of the final space shuttle missions. It was a perfect story to share with the students because it was about one of their peers!

When I was published in a Chicken Soup for the Soul book two years ago, one of my coworkers insisted on printing out the local newspaper article and having it hung outside the school office. To be honest, I cringed a bit. The story itself had nothing to do with school and was really aimed at a more general adult audience. Nonetheless, there was nothing inappropriate in the story, so I let it go.

Now, however, I have a young adult novel published. It’s the story of a troubled girl who finds herself in the position of being a guardian angel after her own tragic death. Since it deals with guardian angels, it’s filed under the category of “Christian fiction” on Amazon. Since it deals with difficult topics such as suicide and drug use, it’s definitely more “young adult” than “middle grade.” For those two reasons, I am not discussing the book at my public middle school with an extremely diverse student body.

I treasure my role as a teacher. When I’m there, it’s my job to help my students reach their potential. It’s not my job to sell books when I’m at school. I’m there for my students, not to toot my own horn.

Nonetheless, you can never underestimate the Googling abilities of middle school students. I’m not sure who started it, but somebody found me . . . perhaps on Instagram or Twitter or Facebook. Or maybe they just found this website. Either way, there are murmurings at school about my book.

A few students have been bold enough to come right out and ask about it. Sometimes I have a little fun with them when they ask something like, “When is your book coming out?” and I respond, “Oh, you mean my Chicken Soup book? That came out two years ago.”

And other times, when I feel like they’re asking just to change the topic in class, I say, “We’re not talking about that right now. We’re talking about your writing. Now let’s get back to it.”

Lovely gifts from some lovely students for teacher appreciation week!

Lovely gifts from some lovely students for teacher appreciation week!

Teaching is a really special career. It can be frustrating, demanding, and heartbreaking, but it can also mean lots of wonderful moments watching kids blossom in ways you’d never expected or finally seeing that light bulb go on over their head. I wouldn’t want to do anything to take away from that. Therefore, when it’s appropriate, I’ll discuss my own writing in class, and when I feel it’s not, then I’ll hold back. In the end, I’m going to do what’s best for my students, and that means focusing on their writing, not on mine.