Romance author Maddie Evans turned the tables on me for this one! She interviewed me about my new book Sweet Jesus, Is It June Yet? 10 Ways the Gospels Can Help You Combat Teacher Burnout and Rediscover Your Passion for Teaching.
The Amazon Book Blurb:
You work hard to motivate your students every day, but where can you find the inspiration you need when teaching gets tough or your passion for the classroom starts to wane?
Veteran teacher Amy J. Cattapan invites you to look to the greatest teacher of all time—Jesus. With humor and stories from the trenches, Cattapan draws valuable insight and tools from the Gospels and shares ten life-changing principles every teacher can learn from Jesus. In Sweet Jesus, Is It June Yet?, she’ll help you hang onto your sanity and fulfill your calling even when you’re feeling stressed, overwhelmed, and on the verge of burnout.
Classroom burnout is real. About 44 percent of new teachers in New York leave the profession by their fourth year and 40 percent of new teachers leave Chicago schools within five years. All over the country, managing online instruction has only added to the pressures teachers face.
In order to combat frustration and burnout, Cattapan will help you:
remember where your calling began
rediscover who this is all about
know when to lean on others for help;
learn how Jesus dealt with challenges
and understand that God’s grace really is enough.
Whether you’re a brand new teacher, a veteran educator, or a homeschooling parent, you’ll find wisdom—and more than a few laughs—in Cattapan’s reflections on the Great Teacher and in classroom stories straight from the front lines.
To catch all the new episodes, follow me on YouTube here.
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I’ve been meaning to write this for over a year now, but teaching during a pandemic (and writing a book about combating teacher burnout — which also mentions The Chosen!) rather derailed my plans. Now that season 2 of The Chosen has aired, and new criticisms of it trying to “rewrite Scripture” have surfaced, I figured it was time to share why I think this TV show could play an important role in evangelization and how on earth it ended up in my dissertation for my doctorate in education.
My Dissertation Topic
My dissertation (defended June 1, 2020) was entitled Engendering Empathy for Immigrants in Middle Grade Readers Through Culturally Relevant YA Literature. (YA stands for Young Adult. For the purpose of this study, I defined young adult literature as books aimed at teens and tweens.) That topic may appear to have nothing in common with a TV show about Jesus and His disciples, but what I discovered during my qualitative research is that the why behind my research questions can also explain why The Chosen has been having such a profound impact on people.
My Research Questions
As an English teacher, I was interested in discovering how reading a work of historical fiction as part of a literature course impacted students who were studying that same historical period in their history course. I conducted my research at a school where eighth graders studied the Great Immigration period of the United States (i.e. Ellis Island in the early 1900s) while reading a historical novel about immigrants in their reading class.
The students were broken into literature circles (think reading groups), each of which read one of the following novels:
Letters from Rifka (Karen Hesse) – the story of a Russian girl immigrating to the U.S. in the early 1900s, a very typical Ellis Island story which most closely related to their history course
Inside Out & Back Again (Thannha Lai) – the story of a Vietnamese refugee in the 1970s
Shooting Kabul (N.H. Senzai) – the story of a Muslim family fleeing the Taliban in Afghanistan just prior to 9/11
My goal was to answer a series of research questions to help me understand how these works of fiction impacted their understanding of the struggles immigrants face, especially their ability to think critically and empathize with the immigrant characters.
Slide 3 from my dissertation defense — YAL = Young Adult Literature
Data Collection
As a qualitative researcher, I triangulated my data by using three different types of data collection:
Interviews of students, including a pre-reading questionnaire and then a post-reading interview
Classroom observation, in which I listened as students discussed the novels in their literature circles
Document analysis, in which I analyzed the students’ written assignments
Two Key Concepts: Culturally Relevant Literature & Mirrors, Windows, & Sliding Glass Doors
Like other academic research, my study built on the work of past researchers. The following key concepts have become very familiar to anyone working in the fields of reading and education.
Culturally Relevant Literature
If you read ten different educational articles on “culturally relevant literature,” you might find ten slightly different definitions. For the purpose of my dissertation, I defined it as literature in which the readers see themselves and their communities reflected and valued (Fleming, Catapano, Thompson, & Carillo, 2016).
In other words, everyone deserves to see themselves reflected in the books they read. It was not, however, my goal to adopt a narrow definition of “culture” to mean simply “ethnicity.” Culture has many aspects. It can include age, historical time period, gender, language, food, geographic location, and religion. For the purpose of my study, it also included immigration status, i.e. whether someone was an immigrant, first-born generation, second generation, or beyond.
Mirrors, Windows, & Sliding Glass Doors
In 1990, Dr. Rudine Sims Bishop published an article entitled “Mirrors, Windows, and Sliding Glass Doors,” which has become the seminal piece in explaining why we need culturally relevant literature. According to Dr. Bishop, readers might have three different kinds of experiences when reading a book.
First, the book might be a mirror experience, in which the reader sees her own experience reflected. For example, as a Catholic, Italian American living in Chicagoland, I can read Carmela Martino’s middle grade novel Rosa, Solaand have a mirror experience because I can relate to the main character’s Italian culture, language, food, and religion. I would not, however, relate to the girl’s age (10) or her historical time period (1960s).
At the same time, a ten-year-old Irish Catholic girl might not relate to Rosa’s Italian culture, but she would see mirrored in the book her own religion and relate to Rosa as a fellow ten-year-old girl. Both the Irish Catholic girl and I could have mirror experiences with the same book, but in different ways.
Secondly, the book might offer a window experience by allowing the reader to peer into a culture that is different from her own. For example, I have no idea what it’s like to be an African-American teenage girl in the 21st century, but reading a young adult novel like The Hate U Give (Thomas, 2017) can act like a window that allows me to peer into that world for a while.
Thirdly, books can be sliding glass door experiences. In this case, the reader is able to “step through” and enter into the character’s unique experiences. In my dissertation, I offered the example of the middle grade novel Return to Sender by Julia Alvarez (2010). The chapters alternate perspectives and, with each one, we step into a different world. At times we step into the world of a Caucasian boy who can’t fathom why his family has hired undocumented workers to help on the family farm in Vermont. At other times, we step into the world of the Catholic Mexican daughter of one of those undocumented workers.
Participants in My Research
As stated above, I conducted interviews with students in addition to collecting data through classroom observations and document analysis.
My interview participants were 9 eighth graders. For clarity, I referred to immigrants as “first generation,” children with at least one immigrant parent as “second generation,” and grandchildren of one or more immigrant grandparents as “third generation.” My participants broke down as follows:
One first generation – an immigrant from Vietnam, who had arrived in the U.S. only a few years earlier
Seven second generation – children with at least one immigrant parent. Countries represented in this sampling included Bosnia, Assyria, Mexico, Romania, Albania, and Poland.
One third generation – the grandchild of an immigrant from India.
Data Results
Most of what my data found was confirmation of what previous researchers had found through quantitative measures; that is, that students developed greater empathy for real-life immigrants through reading fiction (Vezzali, Stathi, & Giovannini, 2012).
It was no great surprise that the Vietnamese immigrant related to the Vietnamese refugee in Inside Out & Back Again. In terms of culture, language, and food, she definitely had mirror experiences. However, she also admitted to having a bit of a window experience in that she was not a refugee who escaped rather quickly. Rather, her family applied for immigration and waited ten years to get permission to move to the U.S. Fortunately, her family was not the dire straits of the main character in the book, so she was able to peek into the dangerous world of what refugees from her country experienced during the Vietnamese War.
Meanwhile, some second-generation students related the character’s experiences to what they knew about their parents’ experiences. They could almost “see” their parents reflected in the main characters of the stories.
But here’s where things got interesting . . .
Students connected to the main characters in ways that expanded upon previous definitions of cultural relevance. In their interviews, students revealed to me that they related to them in ways beyond just culture, language, and age. Even if they did not share the same culture, language, time period, or generational status as the main character, they still found moments of mirror experiences. They related to how the immigrant characters were often bullied before, during, and/or after immigrating. Not because they were immigrant themselves, but just because bullying is such a prevalent problem at their age.
They also related to similar family situations. Often the main characters had difficult situations with siblings and/or parents, and the students related to that as well. Many of the books involved a character losing or being separated from a family member, and they told me about the times when they grieved the loss of a close relative.
In other words, students were able to relate to experiences even when they did not share a common language, culture, religion, or even time period with the main character.
Things didn’t get really interesting, though, until I looked specifically at those second-generation students. And that’s when I coined a new term . . . .
Crystallizing Experiences
In looking over my research notes, I noticed a phenomenon that I had not seen or read about while completing my literature review. Since seven of the nine participants were the children of immigrants, they had an experience with the novels that combined facets of both mirror and window experiences. In other words, they saw their parents’ experiences reflected in the characters in the novels—almost a secondhand mirror experience. It was as if, in the mirror, they saw their parents standing behind them. At the same time, the novels provided a window experience through which they could peer deeper into the experience of an immigrant and perhaps even understand their own parents’ experiences better.
For example, Avani (pseudonym), the daughter of two Bosnian immigrants, had heard her parents’ immigration stories but confessed that reading Letters from Rifka brought her greater understanding of what her parents had experienced:
When my mom told me the story of her coming here, she only got into detail a bit. She just said she was actually in college in England and then she had to come back for my uncle and my grandma, and she went to America, and she told me a little bit [about] how she came here with like nothing, so I was like, ‘Oh, that must have been really hard,’ but when I read the story, I really kind of pictured what my mom had to go through. I was like, ‘Wow, that’s terrible,’ you know? I’m probably going to ask my mom a little more about it because it’s really interesting.
(Avani, Interview, February 13, 2020)
Avani shared with me how she felt driven to learn more about immigration in general and her parents’ experiences specifically after reading the fictional account of an immigrant’s struggles. I’ll come back to this later when I discuss The Chosen TV series.
Second generation students experienced both “reflection” (left) and “refraction” (right) while reading these novels.
At first, this dual mirror-window experience reminded me of a prism, specifically a triangular, or optical, prism. With a triangular prism, light can hit the glass surfaces in two possible ways. If the light hits it straight on, all of the light is reflected straight back, and the prism acts as a mirror. However, if the light hits the surface at an angle, the light is refracted (instead of reflected) and a rainbow appears. The beam of white light that entered the prism leaves it at varying wavelengths, and the white light expands out into a full rainbow of colors.
The more I contemplated this image, the more it suited the experiences of all the participants. All of them had at least some moments of mirroring. At the same time, they all came to a greater understanding of what it meant to be an immigrant or a refugee. Through the novels, they saw vibrant pictures of what it means to be an immigrant, just like someone sees all the colors of the rainbow when white light is refracted. In that sense, the book took what they already knew about immigration and refracted it for them in a way that brought them an expanded understanding. They could now see, smell, hear, and almost feel what it was like to be an immigrant.
From Prisms to Crystals
Digging deeper into my data, I discovered that these books were able to create this deeper understanding because the authors of these YA novels used a whole toolbox of literary devices (e.g. sensory details, figurative language, first-person narrator or third-person narrators with deep point of view) to give readers the sights, sounds, and emotions of the immigrant experience. In other words, these novels took immigration stories that had previously been “black and white” in the students’ history textbook, or even in their parents’ retellings, and turned them into glorious technicolor movies in their minds.
I returned to my research and discovered something I had not known about crystals. A crystal is “any solid material in which the component atoms are arranged in a definite pattern and whose surface regularity reflects its internal symmetry” (Manan, 2020). In other words, the determining factor in classifying something as a crystal is tied to its internal structure. Just as the atoms in a crystal must be arranged in a particular way in order to make it a crystal, so must the words in a novel be arranged in a certain way in order to evoke empathy in the reader.
Crystals then become prismatic when their surfaces create opportunities for both reflection and refraction. In other words, these books functioned as prismatic crystals. They were able to create both mirror and window experiences that took the students’ understanding to a deeper, fuller level because of the way the words inside them had been chosen and arranged.
These books made clear for the students something they had had a basic understanding of prior to reading the novels. The fiction they read helped to crystallize their understanding. Thus, the crystallizing metaphor works on two levels: 1) to explain how the way authors write their books impacts the ability of the reader to empathize with the character, and 2) to demonstrate how books can reflect and refract the reader’s world in ways that help them clarify their thoughts and understandings.
How does this relate to The Chosen TV series?
As stated at the beginning, I defended my dissertation in June of 2020, which means I wrote the final chapters at the very start of the pandemic. At the time of the initial stay-at-home orders, people were looking for shows to binge on TV and, with livestreamed episodes of The Chosen being shared on YouTube, many more people were suddenly checking it out. (For the record, I binged it in January of 2020. I had just received my IRB approval and had about a week of downtime before I began my data collection in the classroom, which gave me about a week to “binge Jesus,” as they say.)
As more and more people praised this show for helping them to understand Jesus better, I contemplated why this was happening, and I realized that it related to my research findings. The evangelists who wrote the four Gospels were interested in recording history. They were not authors trained in the craft of writing, nor did they need to flesh out in vivid sensory details what life was like in the Middle East 2,000 years ago. Their readers already knew! In other words, they were more like the historians who just tell you what happened without a lot of literary embellishment. Thus, the Gospels can read a bit like a dry history textbook at times.
However, when a talented, modern-day filmmaker like Dallas Jenkins comes along and presents the stories in such a way that the contemporary viewer can now smell the stinky fish on Simon Peter when he returns home from a day of fishing and see the dirt on Jesus’s clothes, the story suddenly becomes more relatable because we can picture it better.
In previous Christian films, Jesus is often depicted as more of an abstraction; his divine nature is brought to the forefront while his human nature is minimized. However, The Chosen, with its scenes of Jesus laughing, brushing his teeth, and dancing at a wedding, reminds viewers that Jesus is both divine and human. It’s as if, for the first time, people are seeing Jesus as a flesh-and-bone creature! He’s become tangible for them.
This meme shared on The Chosen Facebook page sums it all up!
That is why people are connecting with this show so much—because Jesus and his disciples have suddenly become culturally relevant again, precisely because they are depicted as having normal human experiences. (Remember how I said that the students in my study related to experiences more than any other aspect?) In The Chosen, viewers can now relate to the experiences of Biblical characters. Married couples can relate to both the joys and struggles of Simon and Eden’s marriage. Children can relate to characters like Abigail and Joshua. Anyone who has ever fallen from grace can relate to Mary Magdalene. Any of us who have ever tried to convince a sibling of something can relate to Andrew trying to convince Simon that the Messiah has come!
The same thing occurred with the YAL in my study. The immigrants were no longer abstractions. They were “real” human beings, with normal human experiences, like caring for siblings, grieving the loss of loved ones, and wanting to avoid bullies.
In other words, just as it required the skill of the talented authors who wrote the YA novels that brought immigration stories to life for the students, so has The Chosen succeeded because of the skill of the writers, director, actors, cinematographers, costumers, musicians, etc.
What Can We Learn From This?
I hope my dissertation helps people understand the value of reading fiction, and I hope The Chosen helps people realize that it really is okay to use our God-given imaginations to create works of Biblical fiction, which is sort of a subset of historical fiction.
The novels in my study were historical fiction because they included factual historical events, but they also included fictitious characters. Similarly, The Chosen includes historical facts, events, and people from the Bible while simultaneously adding some imagined (but plausible!) characters, such as Simon’s wife, as well as new (but again very plausible) scenes, such as the Apostles arguing around a campfire.
And what’s the best part of all this? Let’s return to Avani’s quote above. After reading the fictionalized account of an immigrant, she wanted to learn more about immigration issues in general and about her mom’s experience in particular. In other words, the fiction inspired her to learn more facts!
Similarly, many are reporting that watching The Chosen is inspiring them to head to their Bibles to pick out what is actually fact from what is fiction. To be clear, the writers are not altering stories from the Bible, but rather extrapolating upon them and filling in the gaps for parts the evangelists didn’t write down. For example, we know from the story of Jesus healing Simon’s mother-in-law that Simon must have had a wife. However, since the Bible includes no details about Simon’s wife at all, the writers have to use their imaginations to create a plausible wife character for a first century Jewish fisherman.
Personally, I’ve found myself checking details in the Bible after watching the show. For example, the season 1 finale covers the story of the Samaritan woman at the well, a story I like to think I know quite well. (My friend Stephanie Landsem wrote a beautiful work of Biblical fiction called The Well, which is based on that same story.) However, when the woman at the well mentions that it was their ancestor Jacob who built the well, I had thought the writers had inserted that detail. Nope. It was only when I was reading my Bible later that I discovered that detail actually is in the Bible! The writers hadn’t made that one up at all.
So while some may worry that Dallas Jenkins’s show is trying to “replace” or “rewrite” the Bible, I think their worry is unfounded. Reading historical novels made several of the students I interviewed want to ask their parents more about their immigration experiences, and others noted that they were vaguely aware of immigration stories in the news, but now they wanted to pay attention better because their eyes were being opened to the true struggles of immigrants. In the same way, The Chosen is encouraging people to pick up their Bibles because they want to know where factual information drops off and plausible ideas enter into each story line.
Final Thoughts
If you follow me on social media, you know I’ve talked about The Chosen quite a bit in the last year and a half. It’s not just in my dissertation; it’s also in my upcoming book for teachers: Sweet Jesus, Is It June Yet? Some people have asked if I’m on the marketing payroll over at The Chosen, which makes me laugh. No, I am not. I mean, I wouldn’t turn down a role as an extra if Dallas offered me one–but I have enough jobs, I don’t need a new one. 😉
Really, whether I’m talking about TV shows or books or interviewing authors, I pray that my goal is always the same: to inspire people to live as Jesus would and to make sure all I do is for the greater glory of God.
Ad majorem Dei gloriam!
Brief Bibliography
Alvarez, J. (2010). Return to sender. Yearling.
Bishop, R. S. (1990). Mirrors, windows, and sliding glass doors. Perspectives, 6 (3), ix–xi.
Fleming, J., Catapano, S., Thompson, C.M., & Carrillo, S.R. (2016). More mirrors in the classroom: Using urban children’s literature to increase literacy. Rowman & Littlefield.
Hesse, K. (1992). Letters from Rifka. H. Holt.
Lai, T. (2017). Inside out & back again. Harper, an imprint of HarperCollins.
Martino, C. (2018). Rosa, Sola. Arquilla Press.
Senzai, N. H. (2010). Shooting Kabul. Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers.
Thomas, A. (2017). The Hate U Give. Balzar + Bray.
Vezzali, L., Stathi, S., & Giovannini, D. (2012). Indirect contact through book reading: Improving adolescents’ attitudes and behavioral intentions toward immigrants. Psychology in the Schools, 49(2), 148–162. https://doi-org.flagship.luc.edu/10.1002/pits.20621
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Hello, old friends! It’s been over a year since my last blog post. Please forgive my neglect, but I’ve been hard at work on my doctoral program while trying to keep up with the demands of my teaching job–and working on a new book project!
In case you haven’t heard on social media yet (I talk about everything on Instagram, you know), I recently signed a book contract with Ave Maria Press! I started work on the idea for this book nearly two years ago during spring break 2018. I had the idea then for a book about what teachers could learn by studying how Jesus taught. I worked on the original outline for that book while on a silent retreat during spring break. When I returned home, teaching and my doctoral program got all my attention again, and the book idea was set aside until the summer.
Over the next year and half, I hacked away at revising my original idea in between semesters and summer school sessions, and with help from editor Jaymie Stuart Wolfe from Ave Maria Press. And now I can announce that I have signed an official book contract with them, and the book should be out during the first half of 2021.
While I have a good headstart on writing the book due to the detailed outline, I won’t really be able to finish the manuscript until this summer since I still have that pesky dissertation to finish first.
Signing the contract with my dad as my witness. Ignore all his Christmas decoration boxes in the background. We’re just keeping it real, y’all!
In the meantime, I can tell you that the book will focus on combating teacher burnout through Scripture reflections (something I could use right now in the midst of the dreary month of February), and I’ll be dedicating my book to my dad since he has always supported my teaching career.
Stay tuned for more news! (And keep the prayers coming for my dissertation. This has been the longest haul of my life, and I’m actually finishing a lot faster than many other full-time teachers do.)
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I’m participating in a 12 Days of Christmas Giveaways in the Readers & Writers of Clean Youth Fiction Facebook group. Come join me!
Join the group here on Facebook so that you can learn about twelve authors of clean fiction for kids and young adults. Each day, there will be a different freebie (short story or book) available for download. Everyone’s winner!
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As many of you know, I appear on The Jennifer Fulwiler Show (SiriusXM Channel 129) a few times a year to talk about books for kids and teens. When I was asked by her team to help her launch her new book One Beautiful Dream, I was thrilled. In fact, I’d already pre-ordered a copy when it was on sale. Last I checked, it was still deeply discounted on Amazon and Barnes & Noble, so I recommend you grab yourself a copy before they raise it back to full price!
Title: One Beautiful Dream
Author: Jennifer Fulwiler
Genre: memoir
In this memoir, Jennifer Fulwiler recounts how she pursued her dream of becoming an author while having six kids in eight years. And in some weird way, I totally related to this book.
At first glance, many of you may wonder how can that possibly be. Jennifer and I are such opposites (and not just in height!). She was an atheist who later converted to Catholicism. I’m a cradle Catholic. She grew up as an only child in a quiet home. I grew up with four brothers in a not-always-so-quiet home. She wanted a career and no kids. I wanted to be a stay-at-home mom with a large family. She married. I didn’t. She has six kids. I have none. She now lives in a small home surrounded by the noises of a large family. I’m about to move into a sizeable condo (large enough to have my big extended Italian family over for dinner) where I will be surrounded mostly by silence except for the soft whishing of traffic from the busy street below.
How on earth could I possibly relate to this book? And not just relate to it, but thoroughly enjoy it and relish in it?
Three reasons:
Jen and I are both workaholics who are also introverts. That means we both have to-do lists that are a mile long, but we also need time alone to recharge.
For both of us, writing is our “blue flame.” You can read more about this in chapter 2 of her book, but basically, when we write, it’s like a fire has been lit inside us. It’s how we connect to God and his creation.
We’ve both experienced guilt over trying to pursue our blue flames while tending to our other responsibilities.
Let me expand a bit on this third one since I think it’s crucial to my admiration for Jen’s book. Some may think that because I’m single and childless that I have gobs of time for pursuing my writing. People who really know me know that this is not true at all. My day job requires nearly 50 hours a week. On top of that, I’m pursuing a doctorate degree. These are things I need to do in order to put food on my table, to pay my mortgage, to plan for retirement, etc. When you’re single, every household responsibility falls on you.
Outside of work, I have a large extended family with thirteen nieces and nephews, which means lots of birthdays, graduations, Confirmations, First Communions, and all those other wonderful things that come with family. So even though I don’t have kids of my own, I still have plenty of kids in my life. Then I’ve got my volunteer work with the Order of Malta and my church. And I’ve got multiple circles of friends I try to keep up with.
When all is said and done, it can be hard to carve out even an hour a week during the school year in order to write. And often that hour can come with guilt. I should be cleaning my house. I should reach out to that friend I haven’t talked to in a while. I should help my aging father more. I should offer to bring something to that dinner my sister-in-law is hosting. I should grade those papers sooner rather than later. I should work more on that group project for my doctorate class.
As a workaholic, I realize I have brought most of this on myself, but that is why I appreciate Jen’s book. Through her writing, she helped me acknowledge that this is simply the way God made me and I can carve out pieces of time to pursue my blue flame precisely because that will make me a better person in all my other activities. When I write, I’m energized. A sense of order is brought back into my world for a little while. Simply put, it makes me happy. And when I’m happy, I’m a better teacher, student, daughter, sister, aunt, friend, and co-worker.
So if you’ve found yourself not pursuing your passions or if you’ve found yourself feeling guilty over pursuing your passions while trying to tend to your other responsibilities, do yourself a favor and pick up a copy of One Beautiful Dream. Then carve out a little time for your blue flame this week.
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Welcome to 2018! I hope this year will be one of many blessings for all of you.
As I’ve done for the last five years, I picked a “word of the year,” a word to give this year some focus. When I started in 2013, I chose the word optimism. I chose that word to shake off the negative feelings I’d had toward my writing career–and lo and behold–I ended up with my first Chicken Soup for the Soul book that year and my first book contract the next year.
In 2014, the word was trust–as in trusting in God’s plan.
In 2015, the word was grace. This was the year my mother ended up passing away. As she was passing, one of my sisters-in-law said, “Gee, your mother even dies gracefully.” May I ever strive to live as gracefully as she did.
In 2016, the word was mercy. Pope Francis had declared it the Year of Mercy, so why not?
Although I never blogged about it, my word of the year for 2017 was balance. I think I quickly lost sight of that word.
This year, I decided to do something a little bit different and let fate (or perhaps it was really Jennifer Fulwiler) chose my word. Every year Jen create a “saint of the year” generator to help her fans pick a patron saint of the year. This year, I got St. Lucy.
She seems like a good fit since she was Italian and is a patron saint of writers. I’m also glad to hear she’s “against dysentery,” because who wants that! 🙂
Then Jen decided to create a word of the year generator. Since I had yet to come up with my own new word of the year, I decided to give it a whirl. Some people kept hitting the button until they came up with a word they liked, but I decided to go with the first word I got . . . and that word was . . .
According to my friend Merriam-Webster, “untangle” means “to loose from tangles or entanglement: straighten out,” and the examples MW gave are “untangle a knot; untangle a mystery.”
With work, my doctorate program, multiple circles of friends, writing groups, family, church events, Order of Malta work, writing projects, and speaking events, it certainly seems like my life has plenty of “threads,” each deserving of its own time and attention, but how to untangle them all? How to make sense of where and how to pay attention to each thread?
So that is my word of the year. In 2018, I will try to untangle any knots in my many threads. Who knows, I may even untangle the mystery of how to develop the plot for the sequel to Seven Riddles to Nowhere.
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Some of you may also recall that I keep a Good News Jar every year. In this jar, I periodically drop in a slip of paper on which I have written some good news. While many good things happened during 2017, I only managed to get 15 pieces of good news into the jar this year. I think my friend Carmela Martino had far more in hers. We’ll see what happens in 2018!
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In case you haven’t already heard, my middle grade mystery Seven Riddles to Nowhere won Honorable Mention for Catholic children’s books at the Catholic Press Awards last Friday!
This is a very broad category that included both fiction and nonfiction, and everything from picture books and early chapter books to middle grade books. First place went to a book for children written by Pope Francis, so you can see how tough the competition was!
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Five years ago tonight, I finished the rough draft of Angelhood. I considered it a “practice novel,” something that would never be published (let alone win three awards). It was simply writing practice as a NaNo project for 2011.
To celebrate the “Book That Wasn’t Supposed to Happen,” I’m releasing a new book trailer. Who knows where the next five years will take my writing journey?
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Last Sunday, I had to pleasure of joining a panel of authors from the Mystery Writers of America in a free workshop on writing for young readers. For those of you who weren’t able to make it, I thought I’d share a bit about what I’ve learned over the years with regard for writing for young readers, particularly middle grade and young adult.
TIP #1: Read many books for the age group you want to write for.
If you want to write for teens, read a lot of young adult books. If you want to write for tweens, read a lot of upper middle grade books. There’s definitely a difference between the two, and you won’t know it unless you read a lot of both. Young adult novels have a much more introspective tone and often deal with much more complex questions about life, family, and friends–and most importantly, one’s place in the world. Upper middle grade novels tend to be more about friendships and fitting it, but they can still touch on tough topics. However, if they deal with tougher topics, they tend to do so in more of an off-the-page, slightly removed way, whereas YA books aren’t afraid to bring the difficult issue to the forefront. A YA book can spend longer periods being reflective as the teen protagonist tries to sort out her beliefs. A middle grade book will spend less time being reflective and more time keeping the plot rolling.
Kid readers are smart readers.
TIP #2: Don’t dumb down your stories or characters.
Young readers still demand that their stories are full of realistic and likeable characters that are fully rounded. Flat, one-dimensional characters are dull. Young readers know when they are being talked down to or preached to. Even if you find your sentence structure and vocabulary slightly less robust in a middle grade novel, it doesn’t mean that your story should be simple or your vocabulary stale. There’s a difference between limiting challenging vocabulary (or complex sentence structure) and completely eliminating them.
Remember that your books will be competing with this.
TIP #3: Keep the action moving.
This is especially true for middle grade books, but it can hold true for young adult novels, especially ones aimed at younger teens. In this fast-paced, technology-driven world, your writing needs to compete with 60-second Instagram videos and 10-second Snapchat clips. Study the pacing of other popular YA novels and see if it matches yours. Popular movies can also give you a hint at what good plot pacing looks like. See Save the Cat by Blake Snyder for tips on plotting out your story arc so that the reader stays engaged.
You don’t have to do this writing thing alone.
TIP #4: Join a professional writing organization.
There’s so much to learn about the craft of writing as well as the business of marketing books that you could spend years researching this all online. Save yourself some time and join a writing organization like the Society of Children’s Book Writers & Illustrators or the Mystery Writers of America so that you can learn from others’ experiences. Attend conferences and workshops. Not only are these informative and fun, but you’ll make great connections with other writers and you’ll find yourself recharged for writing again.
Everyone needs a good laugh now and then.
TIP #5: Add humor to your story.
Young readers love humor. Even if you’re writing a serious story, see if you can’t inject a little humor now and then (even if it’s sarcastic) in order to vary the tone and tempo of your story. Being in middle school and high school is no walk in the park. Teens and tweens enjoy the chance to laugh even in the midst of their struggles. Create a character that they can laugh with, and they’ll be eating out of your hands.
Keep your writing timeless, not uber trendy.
TIP #6: Don’t overdo the slang.
I’ve seen a couple unpublished authors do this. They think they have to use “teen speak” in their books in order for their characters to seem realistic. The problem is two-fold: first, unless you really know how teens speak, you’ll probably misuse any slang you think they use. Second, whatever terms are popular today are likely to be unpopular by the time your book is published. While you don’t want your teen characters to sound too adult, you also don’t want them so firmly rooted in a generations’s slang that the book quickly becomes dated.
Don’t bore your reader until she’s tempted to throw her books up into the air.
TIP #7: Avoid overly lengthy descriptions.
This one is especially true for the middle graders. Older teens can better wade through description if it’s told in an interesting enough voice, but my middle schoolers often lament books where the narrator just “describes stuff too much.” They want the action to keep moving. Give them enough description that they can picture the character and the setting, but don’t create long paragraphs of description. Work the description into the action. Instead of telling them every single detail about your character’s appearance at once, sprinkle the description throughout the story. Have her catch her reflection in a shop window and remark how typically flat her blonde hair looks today. Or have her slip on her shoes as she laments the fact that her feet are so freakishly small she has to shop in the kids’ department.
Are you writing for a teen or a tween?
TIP #8: Know your age group.
As stated before, some people really struggle with the difference between YA and middle grade. If you don’t have children in those age groups, read up on books written for them. Learn what word lengths are common for each age group and each genre. A YA romance will probably not be as long as a YA fantasy or a YA sci-fi. Middle grade humor books will be probably shorter then middle grade historicals. Again, the best way to learn all this is by reading widely in the age group and genre you want to write for.
Most of all, have fun! Teen and tween readers are the best fans! They are devoted to writers they like, and they eagerly anticipate the next book.
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I’m pleased to announce that I’ll be part of a panel of authors presenting a FREE workshop on writing for young readers on Sunday, October 23.
Registration and parking are all free. Just sign up here.
Here are the rest of the details:
Sunday, Oct. 23, 1 p.m.-3 p.m., Concordia University Chicago, Christopher Center Room 200, River Forest, IL
Expect some treats and tricks—writing tricks, that is—as five Chicago-area mystery authors discuss writing and publishing stories for young readers in an event co-hosted by the Midwest Chapter of the Mystery Writers of America and Concordia University Chicago’s Center for Literacy. The event is free and open to writers and readers of all ages. Free parking is available in Lot 1, at the corner of Augusta and Monroe.
“Tricks (and Treats) for Writing for Young Readers” will feature Kate Hannigan, author of The Detective’s Assistant, winner of the 2016 Golden Kite Award for best middle-grade novel from the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators; Keir Graff, executive editor of Booklist publications and author of two middle grade books, The Other Felix and, coming soon, The Matchstick Castle; Michelle Falkoff, author of the young adult titles Pushing Perfect and Playlist for the Dead; A.J. Cattapan, author of the middle grade adventure Seven Riddles to Nowhere; and Natasha Tarpley, author of the best-selling picture book, I Love My Hair! and the forthcoming middle grade mystery The Harlem Charade and the co-founder of Voonderbar!, a multicultural children’s book publisher.
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