Big news!!!

Today I’m pleased to announce that I have signed a book contract with Vinspire Publishing! They will be publishing my debut young adult novel. I’ve dreamed of this day for so long that I think I’m still in shock that it’s actually happening.

The past few months have been very hectic as I’ve read over the contract details while preparing for a pilgrimage to Rome and somehow making lesson plans for the days I’ll be gone.

Still a lot left to do before my trip, so you’ll just have to stay tuned for more details on my upcoming book!

Writing Wednesday: What’s the difference between “maybe” and “may be”?

One of my brilliant sixth graders asked this question recently. Don’t underestimate kids. They ask great questions!

May be (two words)

When may and be are written separately, they are both being used as verbs. May could be acting as the helping verb, and be could be acting as the main verb.

For example: This may be our last chance to buy a turkey before Thanksgiving.

Or, the two words might both be acting as helping verbs in front of a main verb.

For example: She may be arriving late for Thanksgiving dinner.

And as today is the day before Thanksgiving, may I wish you all a Happy Turkey Day!

Maybe (one word)

When maybe is written as one word, it is an adverb that means “perhaps” or “possibly.”

For example: Maybe we will take a nap after eating all that turkey.

Still not sure what to use? Test it!

If you’re not sure which version to use, try putting “perhaps” or “possibly” in its place. If it works, write it as one word. If not, write it as two words.

Monday Book Review: Silent to the Bone by E.L. Konigsburg

You may recognize author E.L. Konigsburg’s name from From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler, but Silent to the Bone is a completely different kind of book.

Silent to the BoneTitle: Silent to the Bone

Author: E.L. Konigsburg

Genre: contemporary realistic fiction

Age group: YA

Summary: Thirteen-year-old Connor tries to help his friend Branwell regain his powers of speech. Branwell’s silence began the night his baby sister went into a coma. The nanny believes Branwell must have dropped his baby sister, but Connor doesn’t believe his best friend would’ve done that. After finding a way to communicate with Branwell through pictures, Connor begins to investigate what really happened that night.

Although I don’t want to give anything away, I think parents should know that there’s sexual activity involved in this book, and they shouldn’t hand it to a fourth grader who’s just read From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler, thinking that if the kid liked the one book that they’d like the other. This book is definitely for an older audience.

The story is well-told, and I enjoyed how Connor uses his smarts to figure out what happened that night, but I’d rather read From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler.

 

Monday Book Review: Ender’s Game by Orson Scott Card

I first heard of the book Ender’s Game when I was teaching high school, and the teacher in the classroom next to mine was using it as part of her curriculum in sophomore English. I figured it must be a very classic, literary type of book. Ha! I had no idea it was science fiction or that it had such a large fan base. Here we are many years later, and the movie version is finally coming out this Friday, November 1.

photo-26Title:  Ender’s Game

Author: Orson Scott Card

Genre: science fiction

Age group: YA

Synopsis: In a futuristic society that only allows two children per couple, Andrew “Ender” Wiggins is a “third.” However, Ender is also a child genius and is the only one of his siblings drafted into the Battle School, where he will train to defend the world from an ongoing war against the “buggers,” insect-like aliens who have repeatedly attacked the human race. Ender’s training includes many simulation games against other teams of trainees. As Ender increases in skill and success, he worries that he’s becoming more like his older brother who is a brilliant yet cruel boy.

I read Ender’s Game several years ago, so I really only remember two things about my initial reaction: first, this is a great book for those who like science fiction (The world-building is excellent); second, the simulated battles were somewhat interesting to me but I’m sure someone who’s into military tactics would be much more interested than I was.

The best part of this book is the shocking ending, which I will not give away. I’m interested in seeing how the public reacts to the movie version. I know many sci-fi kids who’ve enjoyed the book, so I bet they’re looking forward to the movie.

Monday Book Review: Hidden Talents by David Lubar

I’ve used the young adult novel Hidden Talents as a read-aloud book to middle school students for about five years now. I’ve read it to sixth graders and eighth graders. In total,  over 500 kids have heard me read this book, and I could count on one hand the number of kids who didn’t like it.

How’s that for an endorsement?

Hidden TalentsTitle: Hidden Talents

Author: David Lubar

Genre: speculative

Age group: early young adult

Synopsis: Thirteen-year-old Martin Anderson has been kicked out of middle school after middle school for being a smart aleck. He seems to know just the right thing to say to push someone’s buttons. Finally, he’s sent to Edgeview Alternative School, where he meets kids who are constantly setting fires, bullying, cheating, and stealing. At least, that’s how things appear until Martin gets to know them better and discovers his classmates have some hidden talents.

As I said in the beginning, kids love this book, even the reluctant readers. However, I want to let parents know that the book does have some “minor” swears. For example, when I read the book aloud to the kids, I change the damn‘s into darn‘s and the “This sucks” into “This stinks.” No F-bombs are dropped in the book (and I’ve certainly seen that in some young adult books), but I think it only fair for parents to know that the language is more PG than G.

I got to meet David Lubar at an International Reading Association Conference a couple years ago. He’s a funny guy, which isn’t surprising since his humor (perfect for middle school kids) shines through in his books. The kids enjoyed Hidden Talents so much, I eventually had to ask the school to buy us the sequel, True Talents, so that we could read that as well.

Authors at IRA 2012

Meeting Authors at the International Reading Association Conference

In the photo above (from left to write): Kristin Simmons (author of Article-5), Kendare Blake (author of Anna Dressed in Blood), me (author of several magazine articles, this blog, and a Chicken Soup for the Soul story), David Lubar (author of Hidden Talents), and Annette and Gina Cascone (authors of Grave Secrets).

Monday Book Review: Z for Zachariah by Robert C. O’Brien

This book is sort of “dystopia before dystopia was cool.” Dystopian fiction has been quite popular during the last decade, from The Hunger Games trilogy to the Divergent trilogy (final come books out October 22!). However, authors have long been telling tales about not-too-distant futuristic times in which the world has the possibility of becoming perfect but is actually quite imperfect instead.

Z for Zachariah was published first in 1974, at a time when nuclear war was an all too present threat. This book may be more apocalyptic than dystopian, but it definitely has a similar feel.

IMG_3996Title: Z for Zachariah

Author: Robert C. O’Brien

Genre: science fiction

Age group: young adult

Synopsis: By some miracle of geography, the valley where sixteen-year-old Ann Burden lives remains practically untouched by a nuclear war that has destroyed the rest of the world. Outside the valley is only death and destruction. Determined to see if there are any other survivors, Ann’s parents leave the valley. Ann survives alone in the valley for a year without any sign of return from them. Finally, a man in a strange green suit appears. He is a scientist and has found a way to survive in the radiation-filled world outside the valley. Ann begins to dream of building a new life with this man, but he has other ideas.

This book is definitely more young adult than middle grade because of some mature topics, but it’s still quite tame compared to many YA books today. I enjoyed this “what if” premise. What if you were left alone and you thought the survival of the human race depended on you and one other person? What risks would you be willing to take to secure your own survival?

Writing Wednesday: Saving the Cat, Anticlimaxes and How I Met Your Mother

When the penultimate season of How I Met Your Mother aired last May, I blogged about how monumental a task the writers would have in order to make us fall in love with the woman Ted will marry. After watching the opening of the final season Monday night, I think the writers did some things completely right and other things completely wrong (or at least, sort of wrong).

SPOILER ALERT! If you DVR’d the show but haven’t watched it yet, you may want to hold off on reading this blog post.

What they got right:

There’s a book on screenwriting called Save the Cat by Blake Snyder that many writers use to help them structure their plots. One of the points Snyder makes is that the author must make us fall in love with the hero/heroine early on. One of the best ways to do that, claims Snyder, is to give the hero a scene in which he saves a cat. This doesn’t have to be a literal cat that the hero saves. Rather, the hero simply has to do something good for another human being so that we see him as a empathetic character.

By the way, this is how authors sometimes get us to like guys who are sort of “bad guys.” As long as they show empathy for another human being, we don’t care if they’re not perfect. We just have to know that our hero is a good guy deep down.

The screenwriters for How I Met Your Mother got this right because the first real interaction we see between her and another cast member involves her saving Lily from a bad situation. Lily’s just ditched Ted on the way Barney and Robin’s wedding. She’s upset because her husband and baby are still in Minnesota, and her mother-in-law keeps sending annoying pictures of the baby in order to get Lily and Marshall to not move to Italy. The Mother comes to the rescue when she meets Lily on the train, overhears her muttering to herself, and offers her a homemade cookie and a sympathetic ear. Cat saved!

What they may have gotten wrong:

I’m not an expert on plot structure for romantic comedies, but a number of my friends write romances, so I have a little idea of what is expected in terms of how the characters are introduced. While I can’t remember the exact number, I know there’s a belief out there that the hero and heroine should meet within the first X number of pages. Again, I don’t remember the exact number, but it’s fairly early on. The reader shouldn’t be kept guessing who the hero and heroine are.

On this count, the screenwriters of HIMYM got this wrong right from the start. Perhaps, this is why so many people out there still think he should end up with Robin. Or at least, Victoria, who was introduced during season 1.

That being said, you can break the rules now and then. I still believe they can make us fall in love with the Mother.

Another thing they may have gotten right:

They threw in a flash-forward scene in which the Mother and Ted are back at the hotel (a.k.a. the scene of the wedding where they met), and the two of them are very happy together. Seeing Ted so happy with the Mother would make most fans of the show like the Mother. After all, if Ted loves her so much, and we want Ted to be happy, then this woman must be all right after all.

Then again . . .

In this flash-forward scene, we see Ted and the Mother kiss. Oh. Anticlimax. Usually, in a romance, we work our way up to the big kiss. Anybody else remember how Victoria made Ted close his eyes before they kissed, and then she disappeared? Why did she disappear? Because the anticipation of the kiss can often be the best part of it!

So I think we may have seen the first kiss between the two of them too soon. There’s no build-up to it. Their first kiss has just become an anticlimax!

Despite all that, I’m still looking forward to seeing how they tie everything up in this last season.

Did you see the season opener? What did you think of it?

Monday Book Review: Boys Without Names by Kashmira Sheth

Child labor in sweatshops was a common practice in America in the 1800s and early 1900s. Unfortunately, it still exists in some countries today. In her book Boys Without Names, Kashmira Sheth imagines the story of one eleven-year-old boy tricked into working in a sweatshop in India.

IMG_3974Title: Boys Without Names

Author: Kashmira Sheth

Genre: contemporary realistic fiction

Age group: middle grade

Synopsis: Eleven-year-old Gopal lives in a small village in India with his parents and twin younger siblings. In order to free themselves from their poverty, they pack their few belongings to move to the city of Mumbai. However, Gopal’s dad disappears along the way. Gopal manages to get his mom and siblings to his uncle’s home in Mumbai, but he knows he must earn money to help pay for their food and his schooling. When another boy tells him of a possible job, Gopal is tricked into working in a sweatshop where the owner does not allow the boys to talk or even use their real names. The boys are forced to work for no money and little food. Late one night, Gopal begins to tell the other boys stories, and he realizes that these stories may be the key to their escape.

I enjoyed this book, and I know at least one of my students read it this summer and also enjoyed it. For most kids, it will be a real eye-opener as to what children in other countries endure. Gopal’s simple existence illuminates just how extravagant our American homes really are. When Gopal moves into his uncle’s home, he is amazed to see a small TV there. However, he doesn’t turn it on for fear he might not do it correctly and accidentally break it.

Monday Book Review: Bamboo People by Mitali Perkins

I’ll admit I didn’t expect to like this book when I first picked it up. It’s on my school’s summer reading list and the 2014 Rebecca Caudill nominee list. However, I must admit it was a pleasant surprise. I found myself caring for the characters far more than I thought I would, and the book gives good insight into a culture most of us never pay attention to.

The book takes place in Burma (which is now often called Myanmar). My initial limited knowledge of Burma came from the fact that I once played Tuptim in a production of The King and I. Tuptim was a “gift” from the King of Burma to the King of Siam. Yep, limited knowledge.

I started to learn a bit more about the country when working on research projects with my students. The students needed to research a leader (political, religious, business), and the school librarian suggested I use Aung San Suu Kyi as an example because none of the kids would probably pick her. If you’re not familiar with her, she’s a civil rights activist in her home country of Burma/Myanmar. Her dad was actually one of the key players in Burma’s independence from Great Britain. Now Suu Kyi demonstrates peacefully for a democratic government in her country. (Unfortunately, they went from being ruled by Britain to being ruled by a very militaristic government.)

This story opened my eyes to an entirely different struggle for the people in Burma.

IMG_3785Title: Bamboo People

Author: Mitali Perkins

Genre: contemporary fiction

Age group: YA

Synopsis: The story begins from the perspective of Chiko, a Burmese boy whose father was taken by the government. He is not allowed to read anything not approved by the government, so he hides his father’s stash of books. He and his mother live in fear and hunger, so he decides to answer a newspaper ad looking for young men to become teachers. When he arrives, he is swept off into the military like many other boys his age. The boys are told they must be patriotic and fight to rid their land of the Karenni, one of the many ethnic minorities in Burma. Halfway through the story, we switch perspectives. We follow the story from the perspective of Tu Reh, a young Karenni boy whose home was destroyed by Burmese soldiers.

To tell anymore of the story would give too much away. I’m not sure yet how kids will react to the story, but I found it to be a fascinating look into a very different culture.

Monday Book Review: Fablehaven by Brandon Mull

If you follow children’s books at all, you’ve probably heard of this one already, but just in case you haven’t, here’s a book for all you fantasy lovers out there.

IMG_3790Title: Fablehaven

Author: Brandon Mull

Genre: fantasy

Age group: middle grade

Synopsis: Thirteen-year-old Kendra and her eleven-year-old brother Seth are sent to stay at their grandparents’ house while their parents are on a cruise. However, when they arrive, Grandma is missing, and with the help of some magical milk, they discover that their grandparents’ home in the woods is much more than it first appears to be. Their grandfather is the guardian of Fablehaven, a magical place where mystical creatures (satyrs, witches, fairies) go to keep from becoming extinct. However, strict rules govern Fablehaven, and if those rules are broken, terrible evil is unleashed.

A good number of my students have read this book and enjoyed it. It’s a little like the Sisters Grimm series, except I’d say the Fablehaven series (yes, this is just the first one) is darker in general. If your kid is easily scared, I wouldn’t recommend they read this one at night before going to bed.

Overall, it’s a fun, imaginative read that will please fantasy lovers of all ages.